Re-Pitch

My group and i took the phone call concept and family concept from our originally constructed idea but fixed it with the slight cliche of guns being thrilling to create one of Kristians orginal ideas. We pitched this to Matt and immediately got a thumbs up on the idea, however he warned us to be cautious of when we write the script as the casual-ness may lead to a slight implication of comedy as appose to thriller. Matts favourite part of it was the way we took an idea that so many groups have and use in a way to make it unique and stand out and avoid the cliche problems that end up making it un-interesting for an audience to watch. Overall we are excited to get to the planning part of the process and put the thriller into action.

We have being going through a list of things that we are going to change and improve. We had a long think about casting, the people that appear in the thriller may set the tone for the audience as to whether or not they think they will enjoy it or not because in the first few minutes is where the audience will decide this. In the end we cast Mike and Ezra as they are two people that will appear well on camera together and the ages will bring realism to the characters, the more believeable it is the more real it feels meaning the more suspense is created. We will devise a script that is not funny in any way so that there is no chance of the thriller being mis-construed into something light hearted because we want the severity to be clear.